Another Scoop: Renhai No. 20

by John Daleiden (jd) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

An orange crane
lifts immense steel girders—
changing skyline.       /jd

A piece of string in the beak—         /vs
among tree buds, a new nest.         /jd

Backyard sandbox—
the boy's backhoe lifts
another scoop.         /vs

in Renhai Studio

Archive Id: 20
John Daleiden: USA
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written: May 6-8, 2008

Theme: Horizons
Season: Spring (Middle)
Kigo: Tree buds; New nest
Verse Form: Free
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Crane / Bird; Building / Nest; Macro / Micro
Links 2/3: Nest / Sandbox; Beak / Backhoe
Links 3/1: Crane / Backhoe; Construction site; Human; Child / Adult

Notes: The middle verse of this Renhai inspired two other Renhai by Vaughn and John which formed this triad:

Renhai 20: Another Scoop; Theme: Horizons
Renhai 27: Sringing Things; Theme: Making useful things; String
Renhai 40: Sunrise, Sunset; Theme: Cycle of change in the natural world

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