Katie Bar the Door: Renhai No. 291

by John Daleiden (jd) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

a beaver tail's slap...
another stick jammed into
the growing pile       /vs

voices in the autumn night...       /jd
the back door, did it get locked?       /vs

the burglars
dump red juice on the photos—
a broken window       /jd

in Renhai Studio

Archive Id: 291
John Daleiden: USA
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written: October 26 - November 6, 2011

Theme: Security
Season: Autumn
Kigo: "autumn night" (also implied by the beaver preparing a house for winter)
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward (2A/2B, 3, 1)

Links 1/2: Sound (Slap / Voices).
Links 2/3: Door / Window; (Human) home setting.
Links 3/1: Destroyed / Built up.

Notes: *Theme of security:
—> Beaver house (secured);
—> Door locked? (undetermined);
—> Broken in (unsecured)

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