Left Behind: Renhai No. 296

by John Daleiden (jd) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

bits of black paint
on the rear left fender—
"sorry" note...       /vs

lingering afternoon heat—       /jd
ants on a Popsicle stick       /vs

melted chocolate—
footprints leading to the door
cross a white carpet       /jd

in Renhai Studio

Archive Id: 296
John Daleiden: USA
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written: October 20 - November 26, 2011

Theme: Remnants
Season: Autumn
Kigo: Lingering heat
Verse Form: Free
Process: Forward (2A/2B, 3, 1)

Links 1/2:
Black / Ants
Bits stuck on / Ants on stick

Links 2/3:
Heat / Melted

Links 3/1:
Door / Fender
Door / Window (implied)

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