While You Were Sleeping: Renhai No. 299

by Vaughn Seward (vs) & John Daleiden (jd)

soundly asleep—
effervescent bubbles
cleaning my dentures       /jd

the rooster, a bit later       /vs
a cup of steaming tea       /jd

the morning news
from her iPad, the latest
on global tensions       /vs

in Renhai Studio

Archive Id: 299
Vaughn Seward: Canada
John Daleiden: USA
Written: October 17 - December 4, 2011

Theme: Morning
Season: Autumn
Kigo: Rooster crowing later
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward (2A, 2B; 3; 1)

Links 1/2: Bubbles / Steaming (physical reactions caused by different external stimulators).
Links 2/3: Steaming / Tensions (hot, boiling).
Links 3/1: Tensions / Sleeping (opposite physical responses in situations / conditions).

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