Beyond the Pale: Renhai No. 193

by John Daleiden (jd) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Torn wallpaper
dangling in the breeze—
abandoned building.       /jd

Desert winter blossoms—       /jd
snake skin shed between spokes.      /vs

Derelict bomber—
all but the engine between
stony outcroppings.       /vs

in Renhai Studio

Archive Id: 193
John Daleiden: USA
Vaughn Seward: Canada
Written: November 27 - December 5, 2009

Theme: Cast offs
Season: All Season
Kigo: n/a
Verse Form: 2-3-2, 3-3, 2-3-2 (Rhythm)
Process: Forward

Links 1/2: Peeled (wallpaper / Skin).
Links 2/3: Blossoms / Outcroppings; Transportation (Bicycle / Airplane).
Links 3/1: Broken / Torn.

 

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